If you think that is so, demonstrate it by providing the proper understanding. But it seems to me that you are criticizing the article by assigning different meanings to its words than the author intended and effectively communicated to everyone who is not looking for indefensible interpretations.
It's a non-trivial request. However, I don't think I disagree with what the paper actually says. Evolutionary stability - for me - ususally refers to the concept of an Evolutionarily Stable Stratgey. If multi-parental sex could not be involved in these, then that would be interesting.
However - despite the section titles - the paper says nothing about this issue. For a start it DEFINES "multiple sexes" as "an equal sharing of the offspring's genome between more than two parent organisms". Huh? You are certainly correct that I am not...
This might be of interest to the evo bio and game theory wannabes here: "Sex Is Always Well Worth Its Two-Fold Cost" by Alexander Feigel, Avraham Englander and Assaf Engel.
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I'm currently trying to parse the article, and on first reading could only see a disguised form of the old familiar argument about the stability of sex ratios. It still doesn't seem to answer why females don't switch to parthenogenesis and block all male advances. But maybe you can detect something I missed?