Douglas_Knight comments on Outside Analysis and Blind Spots - Less Wrong

68 Post author: orthonormal 21 July 2009 01:00AM

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Comment author: Douglas_Knight 22 July 2009 04:00:01AM 0 points [-]

I got confused, too. I think I interpreted it to mean that the Kass acolyte was criticizing KS, but you hadn't included the quote; so I stopped reading and started scanning for a link to the source.

I would have found it easier if you had inserted "Actually," before "The quote is a..."

Do lots of articles play games with the cut? It probably would have been clearer to me if I'd read it with the cut. Maybe you could imitate the effect with an HR tag?

Comment author: orthonormal 22 July 2009 05:30:08PM 1 point [-]

OK, good point— I've edited to make it much less ambiguous. I recall another article or two playing with deceit above the cut, and then revealing the trick below, but it's difficult to find them.