lavalamp comments on She Blinded Me With Science - Less Wrong

13 Post author: Jonathan_Graehl 04 August 2009 07:10PM

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Comment author: lavalamp 04 August 2009 08:10:38PM 3 points [-]

This would be easier to follow and more enjoyable to read if you stated what point you're trying to make, preferably before the large quotations.

Comment author: Jonathan_Graehl 04 August 2009 08:46:39PM 0 points [-]

You're right. I've made an attempt at editing the intro in that direction, which may be somewhat lame, as I had no point to make originally :)

I originally intended only to share the two examples without commentary, but as I examined the meta-analysis, it occurred to me that not everyone would have access to the full text.

Comment author: lavalamp 04 August 2009 09:40:35PM 0 points [-]

I think it's a big improvement, thanks.