Kaj_Sotala comments on The Twin Webs of Knowledge - Less Wrong
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Hum. Plenty of people have apparently had the time to read this, but the post itself appears to remain at zero karma. I'm curious: is that because it's getting an equal amount of up- and downvotes, or did genuinely nobody consider the post any good?
As far as my more poetic sort of writing goes, I thought this if not good then at least adequate, and am a bit puzzled of the lackluster reaction it seems to be getting.
When I read this, I wanted to say something about porn, but shied away.
True, though... it was intended to be a way to sell rationalism and science to those who aren't already rationalists (as well as enforcing the rationalism of those not so certain about it), so being pornish was kinda part of the design spec. Though looking at it that way, I can understand that it might evoke negative reactions because of that.
I voted neither up nor down, because I feel it takes too long to describe a fairly simple analogy; stretching out a poetic piece in this way gives the impression of a sermon. Two paragraphs, in the context of another substantive post, would have worked better for me, and I suspect it would have worked better for new readers as well.
I know it's difficult to be simultaneously poetic and concise, but it's generally worth the extra effort.
Thank you, that's valuable advice. (Funnily enough, I originally thought that one of the problems may had been in the fact that it was too short to make an impact.)
So in your opinion, it'd have been better if it'd been something like this:
...hum. It still needs some work, but you are right - it does seem better.
I voted it down. Sorry ;-0
EDIT: I like most of your posts, so I guess I hold you to a somewhat higher than average standard.
That's okay - anything in particular that made you vote it down? Just the thing about finding out about your own nature, or something else as well?
I found the post sounded a little bit too wooly/new age.
I thought it was adequate. I think I've seen better appeals to intuitions, though, like Indra's net:
The original Hindu descriptions of Indra's net are even better but I don't have on hand.
I thought it was wonderful, and voted it up. I think often about the interplay between the internal and external world, and the expansion of consciousness that occurs as one's knowledge grows year-over-year. I find it helpful for understanding, and yes, appreciating, reality. This post added something to my internal picture of it all.
Unfortunately, I only have one vote to give.
Okay, glad to hear that at least somebody liked it. Thanks, you saved my day. :)