CronoDAS comments on Open Thread: January 2010 - Less Wrong

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Comment author: CronoDAS 02 January 2010 08:58:48AM 4 points [-]

My main characters in failed/incomplete/unsatisfactory stories are surprisingly reactive, that is, driven by events around them rather than by their own impulses.

That's not uncommon. Villains act, heroes react.

I hereby dub this the First Law of Fanfiction: Every change which strengthens the protagonists requires a corresponding worsening of their challenges. Or in plainer language, You can't make Frodo a Jedi without giving Sauron the Death Star.

It's already called The Law of Bruce, but it's stated a little differently.

Comment author: wedrifid 02 January 2010 09:15:13AM *  3 points [-]

I noticed where I was while on the first page this time. Begone with you!

Comment author: Technologos 09 January 2010 04:34:06AM 0 points [-]

That's not uncommon. Villains act, heroes react.

I interpreted Eliezer as saying that that was a cause of the stories' failure or unsatisfactory nature, attributing this to our desire to feel like decisions come from within even when driven by external forces.