MrHen comments on Bizarre Illusions - Less Wrong
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This is extremely valuable to me and I greatly appreciate it. My thoughts are below because I process with words; they are not critiques of your reading process.
Hmm... yeah, I didn't predict that. The whole post was assuming that you had, at one point, read that post. Note to future self: Quote the relevant part from the prerequisite link. I skipped it this time to try cutting down words but it hurt more than helped.
Note to future self: Keep second examples shorter. When addressing a particular subject beyond surface dialog check the language the experts use.
I went for short this time because I thought the point didn't deserve a lengthy post. I think a lot of the initial upvotes I received were evidence that I was on the right track with this goal. I suspect that most of them were retracted later.
That makes sense. Notes to future self: Finish the primary example. Don't expect the readers to assume you did it offscreen.
Where could I trim? I would guess the number example was extraneous. Your summation of the point works.
Okay. This is the big point I get to take away from your analysis. Again, thank you.