timtyler comments on Improving The Akrasia Hypothesis - Less Wrong

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Comment author: timtyler 27 February 2010 10:16:25AM *  7 points [-]

Abstract - Body - Conclusions: yay! - tell me three times!

Other posters - if you have a tendency to start with stories and then ramble, please take note.

Comment author: timtyler 13 March 2010 09:16:04PM 0 points [-]

Brin claims it doesn't work with fiction:

"Don’t put a plot summary at the beginning. Plunge right into the story! Hook ‘em with your characters."