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I think I was the first one to ding you for this, so let me be the first to say you're good. I'd already noticed that you changed your writing style in other posts, and that you had recognized non-productive arguing behavior in yourself and modified it; for me, these changes were early evidence that you were not crankishly locked on to an idée fixe.
Abstract - Body - Conclusions: yay! - tell me three times!
Other posters - if you have a tendency to start with stories and then ramble, please take note.
Brin claims it doesn't work with fiction:
"Don’t put a plot summary at the beginning. Plunge right into the story! Hook ‘em with your characters."