timtyler comments on Improving The Akrasia Hypothesis - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Cyan 27 February 2010 02:54:11AM 10 points [-]

I've attempted here to modify here my usual writing style, to better fit readers of LessWrong; if it's an improvement -- or failed to be one -- I'd appreciate comments on that as well.

I think I was the first one to ding you for this, so let me be the first to say you're good. I'd already noticed that you changed your writing style in other posts, and that you had recognized non-productive arguing behavior in yourself and modified it; for me, these changes were early evidence that you were not crankishly locked on to an idée fixe.

Comment author: timtyler 27 February 2010 10:16:25AM *  7 points [-]

Abstract - Body - Conclusions: yay! - tell me three times!

Other posters - if you have a tendency to start with stories and then ramble, please take note.

Comment author: timtyler 13 March 2010 09:16:04PM 0 points [-]

Brin claims it doesn't work with fiction:

"Don’t put a plot summary at the beginning. Plunge right into the story! Hook ‘em with your characters."