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97 Post author: Eliezer_Yudkowsky 14 March 2010 11:23PM

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Comment author: Rain 18 March 2010 02:20:32AM 2 points [-]

I have found the persona required to interact positively with this community to be very different than the others I have adopted in the past, and the scrutiny is merciless.

Which is to say, I have mixed feelings on the matter, and am willing to continue engagement.

Comment author: wedrifid 18 March 2010 02:26:33AM 0 points [-]

I am intrigued and wonder how much my experience matches yours. Are there any observations you would be willing to share?

Comment author: Rain 18 March 2010 02:52:42AM *  4 points [-]

1) Use longer sentences and bigger words. The community appears to react favorably to academic styling in prose.

2) State all the givens. Things which I believed would be understood automatically and omitted to save time are much more likely to be picked apart as flaws, where the other person assumes I have not thought the matter through.

3) Be careful about how much you share. People here are far more willing to do research and analysis to pick apart every claim you make, even if its a metaphor, and they will look into your background. Any of the information you've posted can and will be used against (for?) you. Alternately, this same point should be used as a suggestion for how to treat other posters. Link to their previous comments and any evidence regarding their claims.

4) Don't let your rationality slip due a sense of comradery. I feel that this community doesn't treat commenters as friends; rather, it feels more like being treated as a coworker who is on the clock. As Morendil phrased it, "I wish someone had told me, quite plainly [...] this is a rationality dojo."

That's off the top of my head and in no particular order. There are other aspects I'm still developing which do not have a formal definition.

Comment author: komponisto 18 March 2010 03:39:03AM *  3 points [-]

2) State all the givens. Things which I believed would be understood automatically and omitted to save time are much more likely to be picked apart as flaws, where the other person assumes I have not thought the matter through.

Yes -- I have seen this so many times!

It's particularly frustrating, because encountering it feels like discovering that you've overestimated your audience at the same time that they've underestimated you.

4) Don't let your rationality slip due a sense of comradery. I feel that this community doesn't treat commenters as friends; rather, it feels more like being treated as a coworker who is on the clock. As Morendil phrased it, "I wish someone had told me, quite plainly [...] this is a rationality dojo."

I've noticed this too, and I long for the day when our rationality skills have advanced to the point where we can be rational and nice.

I haven't really seen 3), and EY's posts undermine 1) significantly, it seems to me.

Comment author: Rain 18 March 2010 02:27:53PM *  2 points [-]

EY's posts undermine 1) significantly, it seems to me.

Of his most recently posted articles: Undiscriminating Skepticism scores at a Flesch-Kincaid grade level 17 and a Gunning Fog index of 17.9, You're Entitled to Arguments is at 16 and 17.8, and Outside View as Conversation Halter is at 14 and 14.5. Note that a score of 15+ is considered academic writing by these measures. Tests of his recently upvoted comments show scores ranging from 7 to 20.

Here's the Flesch-Kincaid calculator I used, and the Gunning Fog calculator. I would be surprised if other measures of readability, and tests of his other posts, did not show it to be academic-level writing.

Comment author: komponisto 18 March 2010 06:03:15PM *  4 points [-]

Of his most recently posted articles: Undiscriminating Skepticism scores at a Flesch-Kincaid grade level 17 and a Gunning Fog index of 17.9,

"Undiscriminating Skepticism" -- why, that's ten (10) syllables right there in the title! My head is already spinning!

Seriously: tests like those do not control for the content or subject matter of the writing. There exists, furthermore, a significant subset of the (adult!) human population who would consider a phrase like "undiscriminating skepticism" itself to be difficult and unusually abstract. Needless to say, tests which heavily weight the judgements of such people are not very useful for the purpose of judging "readability" in most contexts here.

If you want to judge the readability of LW posts, I suggest spending some time reading typical articles published in academic journals.

Comment author: RichardKennaway 18 March 2010 03:34:32PM *  2 points [-]

I would be surprised if other measures of readability, and tests of his other posts, did not show it [Eliezer's postings] to be academic-level writing.

And yet I find his writing a model of clarity here, despite a few randomly chosen articles by other people having a far lower Fog Index. How useful are these indices? On the Gunning Fog page it says "The higher the Fog Index the trickier it is to read." But the Wiki pages for these tests reference no empirical studies.

Comment author: Rain 18 March 2010 04:57:23PM *  4 points [-]

I find his writing to be very readable as well. However, I consider myself highly educated, with excellent English skills, and I have been following his writing for some years now.

I was deferring to experts in the field of readability, and considered it likely that they would provide a better measure than self-reports of "looks fine to me."

Further, it seems likely to me that Eliezer is very good at targeting his audience and maintaining interest despite the complexity of his prose. Academic doesn't mean "boring" by necessity. One of the references from the Gunning Fog page states:

Although we have often given permission for reprinting the Fog Index, our means of measuring reading difficulty, we have sometimes cringed at the use made of it. In our work, we emphasize that the Fog Index is a tool, not a rule. It is a warning system, not a formula for writing. Testing without the support of analysis based on experience can be detrimental.

And yes, I do realize that this criticism can be applied to my own use of the tool, but point out that the measure directly supports my initial statement: "Use longer sentences and bigger words," with the caveat that you should also be a good writer, to ensure the complexity doesn't hinder the message. Or I could add, only do this if you can get away with it (still be a successful communicator).

I'd also like to point out that this feels like a good example of the dojo-style response to my clumsy use of a single word: academic.

Comment author: gregconen 18 March 2010 03:47:14AM *  2 points [-]

EY's posts undermine (1) significantly

What works for EY may not work for everyone else. For better or worse, he enjoys a special status in this community.

Comment author: komponisto 18 March 2010 04:00:10AM 8 points [-]

For better or worse, [EY] enjoys a special status in this community.

A status earned precisely by writing posts that people enjoy reading!

If you're suggesting that the ordinary academic/intellectual norm of only allowing high-status people to write informally, with everyone else being forced to write in soporific formal-sounding prose, is operative here, then I suggest we make every effort to nip that in the bud ASAP.

This is a blog; let's keep it that way.

Comment author: Jack 18 March 2010 03:48:37AM 0 points [-]

It's particularly frustrating, because encountering it feels like discovering that you've overestimated your audience at the same time that they've underestimated you.

It feels the same way from the other end too! I.e. "Really? I have to explain this to you?"

Comment author: Morendil 18 March 2010 08:11:54AM 2 points [-]

There's definitely a martial feel to the way this community requires you to earn its respect, rather than granting it to you almost immediately upon uttering the appropriate shibboleths as is common elsewhere. I'm not sure that's a bad thing.

Sometimes I feel that upvotes are wordless substitutes for what would otherwise be verbal "strokes" of appreciation; the community prefers when words are used to convey info rather than good vibes.

I would add a 5) which really surprised me when I noticed it: link, link, link. This is a community which lives less than others in an ever-flowing present, but instead constantly strives to weave together past, present and future thought and discourse. That could well be an explanation for your 3.

I feel perfectly at home with 1) as long as it doesn't reach the passive-voice level of academic styling. I see the writing style here as literate rather than academic. ;)

Comment author: ciphergoth 18 March 2010 08:47:08PM 1 point [-]

Perhaps I'm just being oblivious, but only the first of these ring true for me.

Comment author: RobinZ 18 March 2010 09:07:09PM 2 points [-]

Actually, to me, the first seems rather like a G* for the G that is precision and the third and fourth seem like ordinary, fully-general good advice.

It might be worth noting that all are fundamentally comparative - it could be that your starting point on 2-4 is sufficiently different to Rain's as to render them inapt.

Comment author: wedrifid 18 March 2010 03:08:57AM *  1 point [-]

Good list. I was going to say "in particular, 3)" but 2, 3 and 4 all seem to be vying for first spot. I've certainly noticed that any forays into comradery seem to backfire. I don't notice 1) but that is probably because I have instead stopped noticing the converse.

Comment author: Jack 18 March 2010 03:32:14AM -1 points [-]

the other person assumes I have not thought the matter through.

It is sometimes very difficult detect expertise and to communicate it. This would be a very helpful skill to improve on but I have no idea how.

1) Use longer sentences and bigger words. The community appears to react favorably to academic styling in prose.

I guess this is right. I tend to very rapidly adapt the style of writing or talking of people around me. I feel like I manage to get in a fair amount of levity, though. Somehow "True story: my lesbian roommate runs mad game" got 5 karma. Sometimes I think, informal language is a way people here highlight really important messages. You'll see really informal bumper-stickers to summarize academic style posts, I guess because informal language stands out from the formal.

Don't let your rationality slip due a sense of comradery.

This makes me sad. It hasn't felt quite that bad to me, still sad that people feel this way though.

Have you thought about which of these you would change?

Comment author: Rain 18 March 2010 02:47:41PM *  1 point [-]

Have you thought about which of these you would change?

They were observations about how I've had to alter myself to fit in successfully. I wasn't trying to judge whether they were good or bad, and I'm not sure any of them really need changing.

The only thing I'd look into further is the amount of time people spend "on the clock" or sparring in the dojo, preferring a bit more tolerance of lighter material. But this desire appears at odds with the standards of the community, as it seems to consider lighter material as pure noise in the signal/noise ratio, and there's a high demand for signal.

To appease both desires, perhaps improve on the Open Thread-style areas. Forums? More easily followed thread structures? Allowance for 'OpenThread' tagged, top-level posts with separate 'recent' threads? I'm not sure what specific action to suggest.