I'm interested in the rest of the sequence, and I voted this one up.

I think one thing that made it sound unattractive is that it's describing a lot of work without anything specific about what you've gained by being more luminous. You mention some achievements in the first post, but not what in particular you found out and how you used it to make positive changes.

I'm intrigued that a lot of the work I've done has been about being more conscious in the present rather than trying to track the origins of thoughts-- I am more conscious in the present than I was, but I may have missed a valuable angle on the work.