MichaelVassar comments on Against the standard narrative of human sexual evolution - Less Wrong

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Comment author: MichaelVassar 23 July 2010 05:51:10AM *  1 point [-]

In what sense could Malthus possibly be considered wrong?
I'm a bit confused here. Are you actually denying the theory of evolution in general?

I'm not generally a fan of evolutionary psychology, I'm somewhat uncertain about gender differences in libido (my priors massively favor such differences, but the evidence moves me away from them, leaving me confused), and I'm moderately optimistic about polyamory, but between bad writing style, blatantly stupid conclusions and incoherent argument I wish I could vote this down more than once.

Comment author: WrongBot 23 July 2010 06:32:50AM 7 points [-]

but between bad writing style, blatantly stupid conclusions and incoherent argument I wish I could vote this down more than once.

Could you qualify those criticisms? What do you dislike about my writing style? Which conclusions are blatantly stupid? Which arguments do you find incoherent?

Comment author: Emile 23 July 2010 03:40:27PM *  10 points [-]

Personally, I found that there wasn't a sufficiently clear distinction between when an argument was part of the "standard model", when it was made in the book, and when it was your opinion.

Also, this sentence:

There are four major research areas supporting the standard narrative that Sex at Dawn identifies in Chapter 3 as underpinned by Flintstoned reasoning, which collectively lead to the conclusion that "Darwin says your mother's a whore." (Ryan and Jethá, 50)

... is very confusing, and trying to be witty doesn't help. Just look at the grammar:

A supports B that C identifies as underpinned by D, which leads to the conclusion that "E says F" (G).

I mean, what the fuck? Is the conclusion that "Darwin says your mother's a whore." or "your mother's a whore."?

I understood the sentence after three or four rereadings, but I certainly wouldn't put it in the hall of fame of "clear and concise writing".

Comment author: WrongBot 23 July 2010 04:47:56PM 3 points [-]

Not my best work, I agree. I've edited the post to make that section clearer.