MichaelVassar comments on Against the standard narrative of human sexual evolution - Less Wrong
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In what sense could Malthus possibly be considered wrong?
I'm a bit confused here. Are you actually denying the theory of evolution in general?
I'm not generally a fan of evolutionary psychology, I'm somewhat uncertain about gender differences in libido (my priors massively favor such differences, but the evidence moves me away from them, leaving me confused), and I'm moderately optimistic about polyamory, but between bad writing style, blatantly stupid conclusions and incoherent argument I wish I could vote this down more than once.
Could you qualify those criticisms? What do you dislike about my writing style? Which conclusions are blatantly stupid? Which arguments do you find incoherent?
Personally, I found that there wasn't a sufficiently clear distinction between when an argument was part of the "standard model", when it was made in the book, and when it was your opinion.
Also, this sentence:
... is very confusing, and trying to be witty doesn't help. Just look at the grammar:
I mean, what the fuck? Is the conclusion that "Darwin says your mother's a whore." or "your mother's a whore."?
I understood the sentence after three or four rereadings, but I certainly wouldn't put it in the hall of fame of "clear and concise writing".
Not my best work, I agree. I've edited the post to make that section clearer.