Sewing-Machine comments on Minimum computation and data requirements for consciousness. - Less Wrong

-13 Post author: daedalus2u 23 August 2010 11:53PM

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Comment author: [deleted] 24 August 2010 12:03:45AM 5 points [-]

There seems to be a problem with the paragraph formatting at the beginning. More line breaks maybe?

Comment author: Emile 24 August 2010 09:58:59AM 1 point [-]

Yes, for some reasons the top paragraphs have style="margin-bottom: 0in;", which makes them stick together.

Some other things that would help making the post more readable:

  • Breaking it up into sub-sections with titles

  • Adding a short summary at the beginning that tries to whet my appetite.