Apprentice comments on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) discussion thread - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Apprentice 01 September 2010 08:28:13AM 3 points [-]

Oh, there is a yummy killer whale in the latest update! That was sweet of you.

Comment author: Alicorn 01 September 2010 11:52:25AM *  1 point [-]

What's sweet about including the killer whale?

Comment author: Apprentice 01 September 2010 12:15:13PM *  10 points [-]

I asked you if killer whales were tasty and then there was a tasty killer whale in the next update. This elicited a small, pleasant emotional reaction in me which I can try to verbalize as follows: "oh, I guess I had a tiny impact on that story I like - it's sweet of Alicorn to interact with her fans in this way".

I thought of the possibility that you had the chapter written already and the whale was a mere coincidence but I thought that was unlikely enough that I could proceed on the assumption that it was not the case.

I'm overexplaining - in my defence it's been my experience that the type of verbosity I am prone to finds a less unwelcome audience on Less Wrong than most other places.

Comment author: Alicorn 01 September 2010 12:37:58PM *  8 points [-]

That's interesting - while I don't object on principle to reacting like that to reader comments, and hadn't already written ch. 32, I don't have a memory of consciously choosing to include killer whales because of your question. In my head it looked like I was going, "Well, they're on an island, Bella would rather not hunt close to humans, somebody would probably be annoyed with me if they ate dolphins... what's the range on killer whales? Oh, those things are all over the place, that's what's for dinner." But of course I read your question, and you probably primed me.

Comment author: wedrifid 01 September 2010 12:33:10PM *  2 points [-]

I thought of the possibility that you had the chapter written already and the whale was a mere coincidence but I thought that was unlikely enough that I could proceed on the assumption that it was not the case.

I wouldn't say the coincidence was unlikely. The honeymoon location was carried over from canon and in such a setting killer whales are the obvious choice of food. They are more or less carnivorous dolphins. You cannot get too much higher on the "similar to humans and eat a lot of meat" criteria.

But you still have cause to be flattered. Great minds think alike and all that!