Alicorn comments on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) discussion thread - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Alicorn 01 September 2010 12:34:40PM 2 points [-]

The only plot I can think of which that sentence would have eliminated, was already up in flames the minute Bella turned.

Comment author: wedrifid 01 September 2010 01:01:17PM *  1 point [-]

She gave forewarning to expect a half-vampire birth. Obviously Bella isn't going to give birth to a child herself but if she does in fact use the eggs Rosalie harvested then the child presents the same risk of being misunderstood. If the Volturi have forewarning it will not be necessary to call witnesses to prove that Edward and Bella's surrogate offspring is not an immortal child.

I had wondered whether Bella would want her children to be (biologically) fathered by a sperm donor or by Edward. While a half-vampire pregnancy does seem problematic the alternative would be to have a child that is vulnerable to death for 17 years and then must endure 3 days of living hell. I assume Bella would prefer the half vampire child if a suitable surrogate volunteered.

On the other hand Bella man not want to put a human through a traumatic pregnancy and prefer a human child that will later be turned. In that case it would be time for Edward and Bella to tour the world, with Edward scanning every male they encounter, looking for the most powerful man-witch they can find!

Comment author: wnoise 01 September 2010 02:12:46PM 5 points [-]

A man-witch: it's more than a sandwich!

Comment author: Alicorn 01 September 2010 01:03:24PM *  3 points [-]

Note that in this point in Luminosity, Bella has absolutely no reason to believe that half-vampires are possible - and neither have the Volturi.

Also, it's Rosalie, not Rosemary.

Comment author: wedrifid 01 September 2010 01:17:47PM *  1 point [-]

Note that in this point in Luminosity, Bella has absolutely no reason to believe that half-vampires are possible - and neither have the Volturi.

Just whatever her prior is for that sort of thing working (maybe 0.3 or so). It's the sort of thing I would expect her to test before she tried anything herself!

Although it sounds more practical to hold off on that sort of thing until you have taken over the world.