Alicorn comments on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) discussion thread - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Alicorn 13 September 2010 02:20:30PM 1 point [-]

Fixed.

Comment author: Oscar_Cunningham 17 September 2010 11:58:54AM 0 points [-]

Another typo?

Eleazer noted when I asked that it wasn't a sexual attraction that she projected.

Nodded?

Comment author: Alicorn 17 September 2010 01:08:45PM 2 points [-]

No, I meant "noted". Perhaps the sentence would be clear with more commas. Eleazar notes, aloud, that Heidi does not project a sexual attraction, and so notes in response to Bella's question.