wedrifid comments on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) discussion thread - Less Wrong

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Comment author: wedrifid 18 October 2010 06:44:40PM 0 points [-]

How does the author restrain them enough so that the bad guys have a chance to build drama?

Unfortunately, in a way that breaks the story for me this time. :)