Perplexed comments on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) discussion thread - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Perplexed 26 October 2010 11:06:35PM 2 points [-]

But morality plays strike me as inferior to positive stories: teach that preparation leads to victory by showing someone who prepares and wins, not by showing someone who fails to prepare and loses.

Maybe Alicorn can give us both: tragic failure here, analysis of the failure in the "media res" introductory chapter, and the positive lesson in the promised sequel. Works for me.