Douglas_Knight comments on Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality discussion thread, part 3 - Less Wrong
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I agree with the first, but not the last. There is also the option of dropping "he verbed" entirely.
This can cause problems. Sometimes when I read a lengthy dialogue in this style, I read a line which seems to me much less likely to by said by character whose turn it is to speak, and I have to go back to the last anchor point where it was made explicit who was talking, and carefully keep track of it. In some cases, after doing this, I have wondered if the author lost track.
Being clearly understood is more important that avoiding the appearance of redundancy.
In some case, I have confirmed that the author must have lost track, and have had to make a guess as to where the mistake is.