thomblake comments on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) Part 2 Discussion Thread - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Perplexed 26 October 2010 06:06:19AM *  5 points [-]

I loved the first half of this story. But since Bella became a vampire, I found myself liking it less and less. But it was only with Chapter 55 that I realized why.

Bella went FOOM.

I hate it when that happens.

Maybe Elspeth will take it slower. Something more friendly, a bit more in line with the Collective Expectations of Vampiredom.

Looking forward to the sequel.

Comment author: thomblake 26 October 2010 02:04:53PM *  4 points [-]

Collective Expectations of Vampiredom

Ha!

(what? that's just how I laugh)