thomblake comments on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) Part 2 Discussion Thread - Less Wrong
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I loved the first half of this story. But since Bella became a vampire, I found myself liking it less and less. But it was only with Chapter 55 that I realized why.
Bella went FOOM.
I hate it when that happens.
Maybe Elspeth will take it slower. Something more friendly, a bit more in line with the Collective Expectations of Vampiredom.
Looking forward to the sequel.
Ha!
(what? that's just how I laugh)