Alicorn comments on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) Part 2 Discussion Thread - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Alicorn 22 November 2010 04:00:09AM 2 points [-]

I'm going to assume almost the whole chapter isn't meant to be in cursive font and that you made a typo somewhere there.

Fixed.

the Volturi made Pera unhide her and most likely everyone else who didn't manage to avoid capture.

Yep.

I wonder how that would work with Demetri.

Wouldn't you like to know.

second mate

That is not a thing that happens.