Alicorn comments on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) Part 2 Discussion Thread - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Alicorn 03 December 2010 03:49:04PM 3 points [-]

if you don't want your audience to be appalled by something

I wanted my audience mildly appalled. In order to make sense of Allirea's motivations I had to introduce her as an imprisoned rape victim terrorized and controlled by the-guy-to-whom-she-is-mate, but she's not a harmless fluffy bunny and I didn't want anyone thinking of her like one.

Comment author: TheOtherDave 03 December 2010 04:08:18PM 1 point [-]

(nods) If it helps, I'm appalled by many of the characters in this series.

It was extremely distracting at first, but by now I've more or less become accustomed to the "Well, yes, (s)he's a serial killer, which is, you know, tacky, but what are you gonna do?" cultural norm. It's amazing what you can get used to, really.

the-guy-to-whom-she-is-mate,

"Stalker" might be a good shorthand term for this.

Though, admittedly, a culture that assumes that of course you will live with your stalker and let them hug you and pet you and call you George has a... well, a different understanding of the concept than I do. (Ref "appalled," above.)

Comment author: Alicorn 03 December 2010 04:39:23PM 3 points [-]

and call you George

*giggle*

I hope it's not too much of a spoiler to say that Allirea's dislike of nicknames is... relevant.

Comment author: TheOtherDave 03 December 2010 05:04:26PM 1 point [-]

I don't care about spoilers, and I try not to think too much about the details of Allirea's history with whatsisname. I'd be disgusted if I hadn't (as above) more or less turned that filter off when reading this fic.

I cannot actually decide whether the matter-of-fact acceptance of serial murder is more or less disturbing to me than the matter-of-fact acceptance of forced prostitution. I suppose the fact that the latter is mostly restricted to the official Bad Guys (TM) helps a little.

These really are awful people.