MBlume comments on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) Part 2 Discussion Thread - Less Wrong

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Comment author: MBlume 31 December 2010 05:34:36AM *  0 points [-]

Up until she kissed him, I had no idea--and for a character whose superpower is "making herself clear," that's being pretty opaque.

I don't know, I thought that

His smile changed his whole face, like he had a very limited version of my power: he could communicate I am happy, impossible to disbelieve or misunderstand.

was a pretty strong indication.