Vaniver comments on Narrow your answer space - Less Wrong

25 Post author: Vaniver 28 December 2010 11:38AM

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Comment author: PhilGoetz 28 December 2010 10:00:15PM *  6 points [-]

(Revised in an attempt to be more positive)

More people will finish the post if you provide an overview in the first paragraph that summarizes what the post's specific purpose is, where it's going, and how we can hope to benefit from reading it.

Comment author: Vaniver 29 December 2010 07:18:40AM 0 points [-]

You're right, the start is a lot jumpier than I realized. I've stuck a sentence in the second paragraph that should help the flow a bit.