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I hope very much to see Demetri slaughtered next chapter, preferably cinematically and in slow-motion.
Allirea (or more specifically, the way people behave around Allirea) can be funny, but the scene with her saying goodbye to her children was heartwrenching.
And Bella is back! I really liked seeing Bella through Elspeth's eyes, and watching Elspeth reassess that relationship.
One request: can we get a physical description of Siobhan, for those of us who haven't read the books? There are various references to her being "huge" and I'm not sure exactly how to construct that, mentally.
From Luminosity, Book 1:
Awesome, thank you. I remember that scene now--it probably didn't stick in my mind across the two stories because Siobhan wasn't terribly important in Luminosity.