AdeleneDawner comments on Luminosity (Twilight Fanfic) Discussion Thread 3 - Less Wrong

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Comment author: AdeleneDawner 17 January 2011 04:40:33PM 1 point [-]

I don't think a vampire reacting to their mate being injured would consider whether other people asking for their attention might actually be worth attending to, as Elspeth does:

"ELSPETH!" my mother shouted, but didn't she have the scar to prove that she could survive being bitten, the baldness to prove that she could survive being powdered and ignited? She didn't need me. Jake did.

Comment author: Alicorn 17 January 2011 04:42:55PM 2 points [-]

To be fair, Elspeth is mistaken about why Bella was shouting - Bella just thought Elspeth shouldn't be leaving Allirea's protection.

Comment author: [deleted] 17 January 2011 11:34:38PM 2 points [-]

Which is actually a fairly telling detail from a characterization standpoint. I'm pretty sure that the Elspeth of chapter one would have interpreted Bella's order correctly. Now her first thought is that her mother might be depending on her. That shows that she's gained confidence in her own power, and also that she's learned about her parents' fallibility.

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