Alicorn comments on Luminosity (Twilight Fanfic) Discussion Thread 3 - Less Wrong
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Aha. I hallucinated writing a clause in the paragraph where Jake wakes up indicating that Elspeth closed her phone to have her hands free to deal with him, but it isn't actually there. Editing it in now. Thanks.