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Ch. 44 -- Wow. Very visceral, very dark chapter... Elspeth putting her father back together was grisly, and because we saw Bella's Revenge from Chelsea's perspective, it became more gothic tragedy than asskicking vengeance.
And now Addy has Elspeth! So even though things are going well for Our Team, I'm left with a strong sense of foreboding.