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You mix up Grace and Gwyn in the scene in Jane's room. It should be Grace following Elspeth, but halfway through you start writing Gwyn and continue doing that throughout the chapter. Good chapter!
Thanks, I'll fix that. (There were too many wolves to give them all names that started with different letters =/)
Yeah, the pigeonhole principle can be a real nuisance.