I'm reading through it right now, and will provide my feedback when I'm done, likely as a front-page post.

Please don't bother to post on this. As a whole work, it is a cosmic waste of time to read or discuss. The parts I skimmed rate high on the Crackpot Index and the subjects are better examined by other authors.

If you dig through this mess and find something specific that is interesting, then a discussion area post would probably be appropriate.