Manfred comments on Write It Like A Poem - Less Wrong

9 Post author: Strange7 16 February 2011 03:11PM

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Comment author: Manfred 16 February 2011 03:56:54PM *  1 point [-]

The first four sentences were intriguing, the second half was good, and the first half was painfully overextended, metaphor-wise.