komponisto comments on BOOK DRAFT: 'Ethics and Superintelligence' (part 2) - Less Wrong

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Comment author: komponisto 24 February 2011 05:00:36PM *  3 points [-]

With this in place, Chalmers formalized Good’s argument like so:

I recommend substituting "like this" or "as follows". Apart from the fact that I personally dislike the phrase "like so" (and similar goofy-sounding expressions such as "yay high"), my suggested alternatives are a better fit with the style of written academic prose.