Normal_Anomaly comments on A Transhumanist Poem - Less Wrong

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Comment author: wedrifid 06 March 2011 01:08:41AM *  0 points [-]

Hip-hop savors the sudden surprise stress, the in-line rhyme, the timing that makes you think "Why did that series of stressed S'es sound so fine?" Sublime.

I don't especially like hip hop - mostly because the content is usually unappealing (and content matters to me more than to most). But this quote doesn't have the problems that the OP has. It mostly sounded catchy. Except the timing of the middle part feels a little bad to me because the phrases before and after prompt an expectation lyrical flow that isn't maintained. If that is a part of hip-hop then I don't like that either. :)

Comment author: Normal_Anomaly 06 March 2011 04:22:43AM *  1 point [-]

I don't especially like hip hop - mostly because the content is usually unappealing (and content matters to me more than to most).

I like hip-hop musically, but dislike the content, and I get the sense that lots of people have this problem. I get around this by searching for hip-hop with incomprehensible lyrics or ideology I like. There is good rationalist hip-hop out there. Try Baba Brinkman, sample here. I'm not trying to convince anyone to like hip-hop, I'm just saying it's out there.

Comment author: wedrifid 06 March 2011 04:47:40AM *  0 points [-]

Try Baba Brinkman, sample here.

I like it. The background music track sucks me in and the content more than makes up for the slightly-not-fitting words. ;)

Edit: Am I correct in assuming that his example is a little less distinctly hip-hop than, say, Unnamed's examples. I'm no judge of hip-hop it just felt like Brinkman was putting the emphasis on the key points that fit the rhyme and rhythm of the music.

This guy is more making a statement "I'm a dominant male. Look how I can put the emphasis on the parts that don't really fit in context or flow particularly elegantly. I must be baddass". The latter is a legitimate signal to send, mind you, I just don't feel the desire to affiliate with it whereas I would affiliate with Brinkman, who signals an somewhat different kind of status.