GuySrinivasan comments on Akrasic Reasoning - Less Wrong

-4 Post author: MatthewBaker 05 August 2011 08:22PM

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Comment author: GuySrinivasan 05 August 2011 08:50:27PM 2 points [-]

Unfortunately for you, many of us use "did the author take the time to get spelling and grammar correct" as a proxy for "did the author take the time to think about what she wrote".

i have trouble

i feel very confused

i dont understand

Capitalize the word "I".

as its changed

as its updated

The word "its" is possessive, you want "it's", the contraction.

i dont understand

The word "don't" has an apostrophe.

on a issue

Before "issue", you want "an" rather than "a".

Comment author: MatthewBaker 05 August 2011 08:57:53PM *  0 points [-]

I have trouble editing my own work, I recognize these flaws when I beta for others but when it comes to my own work I tend to get lost in my own train of thought. Now that I have people finally offering to beta my work maybe I can surpass these flaws for good. Also, I'm used to I capitalizing on it's own for some reason my spell-check is not working on I's today.

Comment author: komponisto 06 August 2011 06:48:55AM *  1 point [-]

Also, I'm used to I capitalizing on it's own

Now, see, here you don't want the apostrophe. :-)

Also, speaking of capitalization: "akrasia", "journey", and "rationality" are not proper nouns and should not be capitalized.

Comment author: MatthewBaker 06 August 2011 09:46:15AM 1 point [-]

I learned the moral of the story, don't post to top level without a beta/substantially clear thesis of why your content should be there.