Wow. Reading that story now. You can see how Eliezer's writing style has changed. But his ability to come up with amazingly clever modifications of existing works is already there.
Edit: And there's only one chapter? Really? That's sort of sad. Hmm,
V qb unir gb jbaqre vs gur Thneqvna Ornfg vf fhccbfrq gb or Uboorf.
V qb unir gb jbaqre vs gur Thneqvna Ornfg vf fhccbfrq gb or Uboorf.
Gung jnf zl thrff nf jryy.
Either way, it's a very clever fic.
Below is a timeline of major Eliezer Yudkowsky publications. Note that, to my knowledge, everything on AI before 2006 is now obsolete. That's the nature of a quickly-moving field!