Well perhaps not an insult. But it seems like what you are saying is "This is why I think he might think that but I think he's wrong." If you already think he believes something for a reason you believe is wrong, you don't have a very high opinion of his rationality.
If you already think he believes something for a reason you believe is wrong, you don't have a very high opinion of his rationality.
If your goal is to improve, it's more important to notice and correct errors than deceive people about their absence. I believe it's insulting, not respectful, to attribute to a rationalist the attitude that they would prefer the knowledge of a flaw withheld.
(You might want to take a precaution of asking first if Crocker's rules apply, and communicate the bug report privately.)
Check out the latest episode of Castle (Headcase) to see Cryonics covered in mainstream fiction in a not entirely terrible manner. The details are not exactly accurate but probably not more inaccurate than similar fictionalised coverage of most other industries. In fact there is one obvious implementation difference that the company in Castle uses which is how things clearly ought to be:
Amulets of Immortality
It is not uncommon for cryonics enthusiasts to make 'immortality' jokes about their ALCOR necklaces but the equivalent on the show make the obvious practical next step. The patients have heart rate monitors with GPS signalers that signal the cryonics company as soon as the patient flatlines. This is just obviously the way things should be and it is regrettable that the market is not yet broad enough for 'obvious' to have been translated into common practice.
Other things to watch out for: