Seems to be working as I intended it. Do you perhaps suggest a different form of ad hoc substitution syntax?
Okay, it clicked for me on second reading. I would have used:
And now that there is renewed interest, it would be perceived as uncharitable and mean-spirited to speak ill of the dead.
FTFY
but your way works too.
First, Darwin describes Jobs's (far mode) stance towards death:
But these are Jobs's actual (near mode) actions regarding his own death:
The conclusion: