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49 Post author: lukeprog 26 October 2011 06:52PM

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Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 05:25:49AM *  0 points [-]

maybe my perception of its clarity is corrupted by prior knowledge.

Yes, it is. As well as by probably being smarter than I am, and likely possessing a longer attention span and more self-control in general. Without having to work at it.

Comment author: atucker 25 October 2011 04:59:33PM 0 points [-]

Was it the construction of the paragraph that you're found confusing, or the assumed prior knowledge of various grammatical disputes (splitting infinitives, passive vs. active, singular they)?

Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 05:19:18PM *  0 points [-]

Again, I don't mean to pick on grouchymusicologist. And clearly LW is a special place on the internet, in terms of productive discussion. But my eyes cross and I clench my fists a little when comments consist of "Yes, yes, but [long, extremely detailed nitpick in academic-ese]." So I guess I'm not positive it's valuable, despite what I said above.

Rationality and clear thinking should be as basic as Dick and Jane. But I'm willing to update my beliefs if someone shows me otherwise.

Comment author: komponisto 25 October 2011 05:21:45PM *  6 points [-]

You're not helping to clarify what aspect of the comment made it seem like "Yes, yes, but [long, extremely detailed nitpick in academic-ese]" for people who didn't perceive it that way.

Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 05:40:55PM 1 point [-]

It's one of the most highly upvoted comments on the page (after another nitpick), and it seems to completely miss the point of the OP. Call me naive, but I was hoping commenters would deliberately try to follow Luke's recommendations.

I reacted emotionally because I'm frustrated by the mental distance between myself and the "people who didn't perceive it that way." I'm doubly frustrated by the mental distance between those people and the rest of the world. The world needs you guys! Don't make it so hard for them to understand what you're trying to say!

Comment author: pedanterrific 25 October 2011 07:47:01PM 3 points [-]

But my eyes cross and I clench my fists a little when comments consist of "Yes, yes, but [long, extremely detailed nitpick in academic-ese]." ...

Rationality and clear thinking should be as basic as Dick and Jane.

Provisionally agree in the general sense, but... should linguistics? (And what about physics?) I guess my objection is: if someone has an academic nitpick, why shouldn't it be phrased in the dialect of academia?

A lot of things (most things) on LW are about rationality and clear thinking, but some are about (and require) specialized knowledge. Conflating the two subjects by applying the same standards of discourse seems counterproductive.

Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 09:13:54PM 0 points [-]

if someone has an academic nitpick, why shouldn't it be phrased in the dialect of academia?

To see what happens if it isn't phrased in the dialect of academia. Maybe nothing bad will happen. Maybe something really good will happen.

Comment author: Logos01 25 October 2011 05:25:30PM 1 point [-]

Rationality and clear thinking should be as basic as Dick and Jane.

There is a cost to simplicity in terms of precision. There's a lot to be said about finding ways to convey your ideas with "beautiful simplicity" -- in the way often attributed to Feynman -- but some ideas just cannot be reduced to such a level, and some of those ideas are important.

Case in point: the differences between what a frequentist means by "probablity" and what a Bayesian means by "probability". The existential significance of the lack of curvature to the universe. (Sure, I could say, "Why its a big deal that spacetime is flat" -- but that's conveying a different range of meanings than the other statement, which if I hadn't already 'primed' you to that same understanding might've lead you to another conclusion.)

Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 05:51:36PM 1 point [-]

Would you or anyone else care to list the ideas on LW that cannot be reduced to refrigerator magnet/bumper sticker/memorable stand-up comedy routine level?

Comment author: JoshuaZ 25 October 2011 06:16:12PM 4 points [-]

MWI, Aumann's Agreement Theorem, Great Filter concerns for existential risk, anthropic arguments in general, Bayes's Theorem in the non-finite case. But even these are not in general high priority issues for rationality. I think it is fair to say that most of the important ideas can have bumpersticker size statements. But, the level of unpacking may be so large from the bumpersticker forms that they only reason the bumpersticker form seems to do anything useful is just illusion of transparency.

Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 06:29:47PM *  1 point [-]

Think of it as an enticing slogan, then. Or a tagline. Something to lure the lure-able. People read 600-page books based on back-cover blurbs, and they do so on a whim, at an airport.

Comment author: TheOtherDave 26 October 2011 08:14:53PM 1 point [-]

If you want the "back cover blurb" for a 600-page book, that's an entirely sensible request... but it seems weird to criticize a 600-page book on the grounds that it isn't as accessible as a back-cover blurb. Back-cover blurbs can exist in addition to the books; they needn't be instead of.

Comment author: [deleted] 26 October 2011 08:49:17PM *  1 point [-]

Right. I'm only criticizing the quality of the blurb. I'm not suggesting scientific papers adopt a different editorial standard... although I'd be completely psyched if they did.

EDIT: If LW could convince a million people only to remember that their brains frequently mess up and then try to cover their own tracks, that would be a gigantic victory.

Comment author: TheOtherDave 26 October 2011 09:04:20PM 3 points [-]

Agreed.

What I challenge is the idea that most posts/comments here ought to make good cover blurbs.

If I need a cover blurb, it seems more productive to say "Hey, I need a cover blurb, any recommendations?" than to point to arbitrary contributions and say "This isn't a very good cover blurb."

Comment author: JoshuaZ 25 October 2011 06:50:04PM 1 point [-]

Ok. If they are that large, say a one paragraph blurb, then I really don't think there's anything generally discussed here that could not if carefully phrased get the primary points across if someone is willing to read the paragraph and then actually think about it.

Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 06:53:26PM 1 point [-]

Then it's just a matter of getting them into the public consciousness somehow.

Comment author: Logos01 25 October 2011 06:02:35PM *  1 point [-]

Off the top of my head, the first thing that comes to mind is: supergoals and how to assess them. Second: the process of figuring out how to parse a true utility function from a fake utility function.

Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 05:39:21PM 0 points [-]

The existential significance of the lack of curvature to the universe.

Yes, but I do not need this information to get through an average day. Rationality is --or should be -- for regular people, and very few regular people need to worry about the curvature of the universe in an average day.

Comment author: Logos01 25 October 2011 05:49:33PM 6 points [-]

Rationality is --or should be -- for regular people, and very few regular people need to worry about the curvature of the universe in an average day.

Requiring rationality to be restricted to an aversion to edge-cases limits its usefulness to the point of being almost entirely without value.

To relate this more directly: that flat-spacetime thing is very relevant to understanding how "something" can come from "nothing". Which touches on how we all got here -- a very important, existentially speaking, question. One that can have an impact on even the 'ordinary' person's 'average day'. After all; if it turns out there's no reason for anyone to believe in a God, then many of the things many people do or say on a daily basis become... extraneous at best.

Furthermore: one of the things that instrumental rationality as an approach needs to have in its "toolkit" is the ability to deeply examine thoughts, ideas, and events in advance and from those examinations create heuristics ("rules of thumb") that enable us to make better decisions. That requires the use of sometimes very 'technical' turns of phrase. It's simply unavoidable.

That gets all the more true when you're trying to convey a very precise thought about a very nuanced topic. The thing is, regardless of where one looks in life there are more levels of complexity than we normally pay attention to. But that doesn't make those levels of complexity irrelevant; it just means that we abstract that complexity away in our 'average' lives. Enter said heuristics.

Part of instrumental rationality as an approach, I believe, is the notion of at least occassionally breaking down into their constituent parts the various forms of complexity we usually ignore, in order to try to come up with better abstractions with which to ignore said complexity when it shouldn't be a focus of our attention. I've gotten in "trouble" here on lesswrong for making similar statements before, however -- (though to add nuance that was more about whether generalizations are appropriate in a given 'depth' of conversation.)

Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 05:55:25PM 0 points [-]

Do you honestly believe that an average person is ever going to do any of that, in the way you just described, without being raised from birth in a world precisely tailored to make it easier for them to do so?

Comment author: Logos01 25 October 2011 06:10:24PM 0 points [-]

... Defining a few terms:

  • "ever": within the projected remaining longevity of anyone currently alive.

  • "average person": A sufficient portion of people who are no more than 1 standard deviation away from the mode of any given manner of behavior as to be representative of the whole.

-- that being said: no, no I do not.


A different set of definitions:

  • "ever": throughout the remainder of history

  • "an average person": at least one person who is validly described as 'average' at the time it happens

-- Yes, yes I do.


Even explaining that took more nuance than you'd like, I suspect. Please note how radically different the two statements are, even though they both conform very closely to what you said. THIS is why nuance is sometimes indispensable.

Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 06:22:41PM *  0 points [-]

Within our lifetimes, conversational speech will not resemble a legal document. Nor is the average person persuaded by legalese. In fact, they're turned off by it. Nuance is sometimes indispensable, but taking such a macroscopic view of nuance that "average" people from the year 2345 are included is stretching credulity, to say the least (not that I haven't been guilty of the same crime).

Comment author: Logos01 25 October 2011 06:30:30PM 1 point [-]

Within our lifetimes, conversational speech will not resemble a legal document.

Not all conversations, no -- but if an average person is unprepared for legalese then he'd better always have a lawyer with him when he signs anything, ever. This has an unhappy context for our conversatoin: is there a rationality-equivalent of a lawyer?

Comment author: dlthomas 25 October 2011 05:43:27PM 5 points [-]

[V]ery few regular people need to worry about the curvature of the universe in an average day.

So far.

Comment author: [deleted] 25 October 2011 05:46:41PM 1 point [-]

I actually laughed out loud at this one.

Sure, but by the time universe curvature is a "trending topic," we'll probably have artificially enhanced brains anyway. Until that day comes...

Comment author: dlthomas 25 October 2011 05:35:27PM 0 points [-]

It may have been worthwhile for it to have been split into several posts, perhaps?