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My favorite book on writing is Stein on Writing, which has advice for both fiction and non-fiction writing. Possibly the two most important points of his are that non-fiction should not be dry, and that you should ideally grab your reader's curiosity from the very first sentence. If that doesn't work, then at least from the very first paragraph. That's more important than ever online, where the reader can always find something more interesting to read if an article seems boring. (I don't follow this advice nearly as often as I should.)
Here are some of his examples on good non-fiction, excerpted from real articles:
Repetition is sometimes a useful technique:
Adding color can be done subtly - note the one word that makes this sentence more interesting:
An otherwise uninteresting piece of news can be made more interesting with an eye for detail:
Note how much better the preceeding sentence works than if we'd used the cliché of "maintaining his innocence".
The real subject of the next story was the suspension of auto union talks because workers were loath to chip in for health care costs:
An obit or memorial piece doesn't have to be dull:
Nor does the opening of an autobiography:
Is it the word left out after "guard's"? Because, man, it really makes me want to know what two things of the security guard rushed to the scene.
Typo, it was supposed to be "guards".