nyan_sandwich comments on Introduction: "Acrohumanity" - Less Wrong

-8 Post author: Logos01 25 October 2011 09:48AM

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Comment author: [deleted] 26 October 2011 06:12:05PM -2 points [-]

You are using too many big words and your writing is too flowery. Read politics and the english language by george orwell. Use smaller words and shorter sentences.

also, TL;DR.