Notes while reading:

• MACOSX folder is annoying
• pg 3 PhD anachronism; use a contemporary title, there were plenty to choose from
• pg 5 repeated 'what's annoying; 'oh god' not ironic enough?
• pg 10 a reference to pestilential airs might not be amiss (current phrasings too modern)
• pg 11 cute would be quoting from Shakespeare's own verse on this topic, eg. "What win I if I gain the thing I seek? / A dream, a breath, a froth of fleeting joy. / Who buys a minute's mirth to wail a week? / Or sells eternity to get a toy? / For one sweet grape who will the vine destroy? / Or what fond beggar, but to touch the crown, / Would with the sceptre straight be stricken / down?" 'methods of rationality' again is too modern - how would a classically educated Hamlet put it?
• pg 12 perhaps I am missing a joke, but 'new-forged shoe'? Other examples might be better - wine?
• pg 16 speaking of classical texts, I've long liked this Iliad line - "O my friend, if we, leaving this war, could escape from age and death, I should not here be fighting in the van; but now, since many are the modes of death impending over us which no man can hope to shun, let us press on and give renown to other men, or win it for ourselves."
• pg 22 'If only I were King of Denmark, / I might be safer.' strikes me as somehow too prosaic; he spoke riddlingly and not plainly to Gertrude, I recall
• pg 23 'corse'?
• pg 32 I love the red shirt bit (however, I can't help but muse on how to pointedly modify Reynaldo's speech preceding - perhaps 'not stick at adding an ally to the crown so gained'?)
• pg 34 lampshading gets a tad too obvious here
• pg 37 eh... and neither remarks on the crossdressing of Ophelia?
• pg 40 Death Note references amuse me; I like it, but I think you can do that passage better
• pg 42 I liked the accede/acedia joke there; as for the self-slaughter, might borrow some lines from the Carvaka eg "If a beast slain as an offering to the dead will itself go to heaven, why does the sacrificer not straightaway offer his father?"
• pg 55 Hamlet's speech seems ill-written
• pg 56 I commend the Watchmen allusion

Overall pretty good, but I didn't get that much out of it and wouldn't pay $3 for it as opposed to, say, re-reading Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead.