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19 Post author: Raemon 02 December 2011 03:20AM

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Comment author: occlude 03 December 2011 09:46:32PM 1 point [-]

Not at the moment of reading, possibly because I had no standard of comparison. In retrospect, the line "Beyond the reach of God" doesn't reinforce the vision of transcendent humanity quite as powerfully as the original. I think it was the unexpected contrast of moving from the discussion of evolutionary psychology to this futuristic vision of humanity that gave the ending its power.