Some comments, organized by section.
3.1 If we accept the Vorlons' offer to create a stroke-free duplicate, that does not mean that we are claiming that the duplicate is the same (numerically identical) person. We could instead say that some things are more important than numerical identity, and that this is such a case. I think that's what we should say.
3.2 The reversal test for status quo bias is no good here, because which status is quo is relevant. The best way I can think of to explain this is an analogy. Take gold: a valuable substance which, we all know from our science classes, is atomic number 79. That is, we thought we knew. But the Vorlons appear in a hologram and explain that, as a result of their ancient war, the atomic numbers have been fluctuating and all that beautiful yellow jewelry is actually now atomic number 75 - we just failed to keep up with events. Atomic number 79 is now that stuff we call "bismuth". They explain a whole new physics of vorlonicles (as we name the new particles) showing that while the beautiful yellow jewelry was undergoing a change of atomic number, it still maintained characteristic invariant vorlonicle-structures, which allowed it to stay yellow, beautiful, heavy, and so on.
Does this mean you should go back to the jeweler's and yell at them for selling you fakes? Should you return your rings and demand a bottle of Pepto-Bismol instead? No, it means that the essential feature of gold never was its atomic number, despite appearances that it was so. Your jewelry is still golden, and that bottle of Pepto still contains bismuth.
Similarly, in Mark Walker's scenario, nobody was born yesterday, their children are still theirs, and somatic identity never had anything to do with personal identity, because the status was quo. The status quo in one's world, or more precisely the normal workings of things, determines the reference of one's terms. In the Vorlon-world "gold" refers to a certain invariant of vorlonicles - but in the real world, "gold" still refers to atomic number 79.
3.3 The Hatfield-McCoy argument fails. To see why, we just need to look at the obverse side of the coin. Thus: Hatfield hates McCoy so badly that he is willing to undergo radical changes in his personality and memory in exchange for killing McCoy. So he does. The surviving human being claims - with perfect sincerity! - not to remember hating McCoy, and to be a nonviolent person. If we accept psychological continuity as the public norm, Hatfield gets away - from his viewpoint, at least - with murder. The practical-ethical argument is a wash.
6.0. If P2''' were presented without argument:
Preservation of personal identity requires preservation of numerical [token] identity.
then it would indeed beg the question. But I can think of two good arguments for it right off the bat. First, types are abstract entities, and while we may be quite happy with abstract entities in logic, math and semantics, to posit that you are an abstract entity is quite a surprise. Second, people, like animals and insentient objects, are routinely identified and re-identified, and individuated, by bodily characteristics. I've never heard of two human bodies being considered one person based on psychological similarity. That just isn't how we normally think about people.
Which is not to deny that type-identity is important. But it can be important without its being equivalent to personal identity. See my comments on 3.1 above.
“Personal Identity and Uploading”, Mark Walker is the next JET paper. Abstract:
1 Uploading: prospects and perils
2 The equivalency thesis
The thesis disturbed me the first time I saw it; it seemed to me that it either begged the basic philosophical question at point or it did not do any work. So I read on to see how it was used. It seems to be the latter case: the thesis is barely used and not really germane to the examples that criticize somaticism and argue for a type-token kind of personal identity. This is good because it seems like used in any kind of strong sense, it’s easy to criticize the thesis.
(Implicitly, it seems to scope over all individuals - that we could rewrite it as, ‘for all individuals that survive any carbon->carbon transition, there is a carbon->silicon transition they survive’. But this seems false: a book is made out of carbon, survives minute to minute or copy to copy, and can be satisfactorily uploaded, but can a squishy human brain? Can a bowl of water? If I take a stick of carbon and light it on fire, how do I upload the burning stick? What does an uploaded diamond do? One might say the physics of the constituent atoms can be uploaded and this is a correct emulation with any necessary properties like emergence, but then we’re back to the question-begging.)
3 Personal identity: psychological and somatic accounts
3.1 Against somaticism: the big stroke
3.2 Against somaticism: retrospective replicas
This example reminds me strongly of Nick Bostrom’s reversal test for the status quo bias; an example would be a drug that increases IQ 10 points may be feared and rejected, but would it be accepted if scientists discovered new pollution will reduce IQ 10 points and that drug would compensate? I like his reversal test, and I like this example as well.
3.3 Against somaticism: practical ethics
4 No branching
(For those not familiar with the literature, ‘numerical’ here is being used in a sense of complete identity - there being complete logical equivalence. So for example, everyone reading this is numerically identical with themselves, and numerically not identical with the pope.)
5 Types and tokens
Walker invokes the type-token distinction:
for 2 false anti-replication personal-identity arguments:
The reader can guess what comes next: he’ll make the move of saying personal identity is the ‘type’ and any upload or copy is the ‘token’. We accept that while the original Hamlet is valuable in many respects, Hamlet survives the destruction of the original if an appropriately faithful copy is made.
6 The type/token solution to personal identity
Points in favor of the type-token:
7 Should I upload?
(This hearkens back to a previous JET paper I covered, “Ray Kurzweil and Uploading: Just Say No!”, Nick Agar. Agar is not cited for this part of the paper.)
8 Further reading
There doesn’t seem to be any discussion of this paper online. My own views on personal identity tend to the psychological pattern, which does not seem to be very different from a type-token theory of personal identity, if there is any meaningful difference at all, so this was a less challenging paper to read than the others, the equivalency thesis aside. The examples may be worth remembering.