kilobug comments on HPMOR: What could've been done better? - Less Wrong

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Comment author: kilobug 28 January 2012 01:48:11PM *  9 points [-]

Edit : contains spoilers

I was a bit disappointed about the Harry-Ginny fake marriage contract story (chapter 25-26). The global plot of Harry hiring the Weasley teens to make Rita Skeeter publish something ridiculous but wrong so Rita would be fired was nice and totally in-character for all of them, but the final story was a bit "due ?" to me. I don't see how the fake marriage contract was such a big deal, enough to get Rita fired, and the length they had to go to make it sounded totally disproportionate compared to the story they ended up with. I would have expected something much more shocking and deep in political consequences than an arranged marriage.

Comment author: hamnox 29 January 2012 06:36:22AM 7 points [-]

I didn't think the marriage contract was as big a deal as the implication that, if the story were taken as something other than a complete fabrication, someone had messed with Gringott's proceedings to cover it up. I can't imagine that Rita Skeeter could keep her job after courting that kind of scandal with the goblin nation.

Comment author: Psy-Kosh 29 January 2012 08:52:11PM 2 points [-]

Gringott's? I thought it was the security of the records of the Wizengamut that was thrown into question by what the twins did, not Gringott's?

Comment author: JoshuaZ 29 January 2012 09:38:39PM 5 points [-]

They managed to compromise both. From chapter 26:

It may be impossible, but I can imagine tampering with the Wizengamot proceedings. It is unimaginable that the Grand Manager of Gringotts should affix the seal of his office in witness to a false betrothal contract, and Miss Skeeter personally verified that seal

Comment author: Psy-Kosh 30 January 2012 01:12:12AM 1 point [-]

Ah, whoops.

Comment author: Anubhav 29 January 2012 07:57:37AM 3 points [-]

To the sibling, I add:

Anything to do with Harry Potter is obviously going to be a big deal in this world. He's not just a celebrity, he's a household name

Imagine if a newspaper IRL claimed that... I dunno, Bill Gates? .... had, say, Japanese ancestry, and they had incontrovertible proof of it. Also, they'd found secret intelligence that he was planning to start a war against Bhutan with the support of the Phillipines. And all of that turned out to be false. Might not kick up a scandal, but it'd sure kick up a wtf-storm and damage the newspaper's credibility.