Sly comments on HPMOR: What could've been done better? - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Sly 28 January 2012 07:47:51PM 6 points [-]

I am going to be terribly unoriginal and say that the whole Hermione bullying plot was boring to read, and should have been removed.

Comment author: mstevens 30 January 2012 04:46:22PM 1 point [-]

I liked the Hermione arc to a large degree. SPHEW was a good joke, and I enjoyed seeing the other witches develop as heroines.

The backing things out for the sake of continuing to be able to write a Harry Potter story felt a little forced.