James_Blair comments on HPMOR: What could've been done better? - Less Wrong

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Comment author: James_Blair 30 January 2012 03:06:38AM *  2 points [-]

The one time I tried this, it backfired terribly. It seemed like a logical sale, but the war games don't start until quite a fair way in; meanwhile, the first ten chapters (which is what the first chapter recommends trying before giving up) don't have that sort of flavour.