Comment on My Way

Thu, 19 Jul 2012 18:24:05 GMT

Having read and liked both, I claim that Luminosity is not an improvement on the original, it's just a different story, if based on the same premises. Like the Twilight series, it has its up and down moments, though unlike Twilight, it generally gets better written as it unfolds. Presumably because you didn't have an editor to make you go back and rewrite marginal parts into something publishable.

Nah, who am I kidding, the original is better written, it has far less of dull narrative.

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