What questions did you want answered? Can you give an example of a concrete improvement?

Was it inchoate in a way that caused you negative utility as a result of reading it? Do you think additional words would've made the experience of reading positive utility?

I have an "insight density" model of writing quality. I prefer to read writing that has lots of ideas per unit verbiage. I tend to assume other readers want the same, but if adding additional verbiage will improve the way others receive my writing, I will do it!