Are you familiar with SOAP notes? The S and O are Subjective and Objective. One thing I don't see from your description is a separation or clarification about what is subjective and what is objective. For example, the patient's "self-concept mode" which I'm reading refers to "level of anxiety, involvement in self-care, relationship with family and friends and general outlook" sounds like it is all subjective (if we are simply talking asking the patient, "What is your level of anxiety?" and so forth). I think it is important to clearly distinguish what is subjective and objective, which seems to be lacking (at least from your description).
"self-concept mode" which I'm reading refers to "level of anxiety, involvement in self-care, relationship with family and friends and general outlook."
Did you google that? If so I'm very impressed!
We covered the SOAP concept in another class, and we've come back to it, but none of the notes on Roy's theory mention it. So good point–I can double check and if I still don't find any reference, I can put that as 'something that's missing.'
I'm currently writing an essay for one of my classes, 'Theoretical Foundations of Nursing.' I'm about the most 'gong-si' class I've ever taken. (That is a Chinese term for 'shit talking,' which is my boyfriend's favourite term for any field that gets into arguments over definitions, has concepts that don't correspond to any empirical phenomena, is based on ideology, etc.)
The essay involves analyzing a clinical situation (in this case a 55-year-old recently divorced, recently unemployed man, admitted to the psychiatric ward with major depression and suicidal ideation) using a theory (in this case, Roy's Adaptation Model). Done. The next step involves finding criticisms with the model...and despite the fact that I've been complaining about this class and its non-empirical nature all semester, I seem unable to come up with specific criticisms of what this nursing theory is missing.
Which is what I need your help for, because LessWrong is the best community ever when it comes to specific criticisms.
Here is a very brief overview of Roy's Adaptation Theory:
Now my question is, what is a specific criticism I can make of this particular theory in general...not "your definitions aren't specific enough" or "the whole field of nursing theory isn't reductionist enough", but something that this kind of theory should have but doesn't. Any ideas?