Zack_M_Davis comments on Case Study: Testing Confirmation Bias - Less Wrong

32 Post author: gwern 02 May 2012 02:03PM

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Comment author: gwern 02 May 2012 05:58:39PM *  17 points [-]
Amateur Science -
I do what I must,
because, I can.
For the good of all of us.
Except the ones who were tricked.
But there's no sense crying over all the missed frills,
You just keep on trying until you run out of pills.
And the Science* was fun,
And you get neat posts done
For the people who are, still alive.

* This parody has not been approved by the FDA for any medicinal purposes nor has it been replicated.

Comment author: Zack_M_Davis 02 May 2012 07:46:04PM 6 points [-]

This is cute, but I think it would have been worth trying to salvage the rhyme scheme. (Maybe "... all the missed frills"/"pills" and "And the Science helps most"/"post"?) You also missed a huge opportunity by not starting a line earlier with the words "Amateur science" (sound-alike with Aperture).

Comment author: gwern 02 May 2012 08:14:46PM 3 points [-]

Amateur was a major omission, yeah. I don't think 'helps most/post' really works because it diverges too much. 'Done' is hard to rhyme with, but checking a rhyming dictionary, I realized there was a perfect rhyme: 'fun'. As in, 'And the Science was fun / and you make a neat post'. The rhythms scan, the rhyme is perfect, and it makes sense by reinforcing 'neat'.