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My suggestion would be to add an introduction. There are many more things to be read than time to read. It's incumbent on you as a writer to convince people that what you have to say is worth the time investment. And you need to make that case clearly, convincingly, and concisely right at the beginning.
For this particular article, you need to establish two things:
A paragraph or two addressing those two points would go a long way towards convincing your potential readers that your article is worth their time to read.